viernes, 22 de mayo de 2015

Story

We wrote a story in the Language class, starting from a prompt sentence without changing any of it. This prompt sentence was: "Mark couldn't believe his good luck". 

Then we had to mark and include the following things:

-Five connectors (In Orange)
-Three sequence makers (In Blue)
-Two examples of direct speech (Is Underlined)

Mark couldn't believe his good luck. Unlike his best friend John, he had had bad luck all day, however, above all he went to Mark's house.

Laying on their beds they started talking. All of a sudden, John wished:
"I wish I could be you, first you had an "A". As a result you got money. Then you got noticed by Raina. Therefore you will start dating. Finally you..."

Mark interrupted and exclaimed:
"John don't worry, in the same way I had good luck, you will too."

Mark lay down again and thought about his day and started thinking about what he had done to deserve this good luck. The next day, Mark woke up to find his mother cooking waffles and his father smiling at him, told him he loved him and then left. 

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